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Rich Hanson Monmouth, / United States, Male, 69
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  • (2/21/2010 10:09:00 PM)

    You'll note nods to both Shelley and Yeats in this poem

  • POEM: Forbidden Fruit by Alexander Steen Stewart (11/27/2008 4:19:00 PM)

    You might check your spelling of 'pursuit' on line 2. No offense meant. It just throws off the reader and detracts from the poem.

  • POEM: The Beauty Of Dreams by Alexander Steen Stewart (11/27/2008 4:17:00 PM)

    A nice effort. It's nice to see you working in a traditional sonnet form.
    You might change 'you' to 'your' in the first line though, and 'doth' comes across as too archaic, not in keeping with the contemporary language of the rest of the poem.

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