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Todd Jones Vacaville / United States, Male, 47
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  • POEM: Broken by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski (6/20/2012 8:34:00 PM)

    Your use of speed to give your poem a frantic nature after the line I bolt upright Is truly a gift. But I must admit I am left in a frantic state like something is missing. Now don't get me wrong I really enjoyed and liked this poem It is my favorite out of all of yours. *****just a suggestion******* try this

    Who will be there
    Someone who really cares
    Now I know
    I don't have to be alone anymore
    Now I finally know...........
    For him
    My wounds
    will grow old.

  • POEM: Dandelion by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski (6/20/2012 8:20:00 PM)

    A lot of young people trying out poetry or just writing/expressing thoughts and feelings miss 1 very important thing. They have no direction. They have no point. They have no destination they want to go with their poem. I am glad that you showed that direction, that for-thought of where you wanted your poem to go.

  • POEM: Dandelion by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski (11/14/2006 10:10:00 PM)

    simple elegance, i love it another ten from me

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