Members Profile

Victoria Hughes Widnes / United Kingdom, Female, 36
This list shows most recent 10 activities.
Activities Date
Poems Rated  
8/22/2006 4:50:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:49:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:49:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:48:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:47:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:47:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:46:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:45:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:44:00 AM
8/22/2006 4:43:00 AM

Latest 5 Poems of Victoria Hughes

Read all 47 poems »

Friends of Victoria Hughes

Victoria Hughes's last comments on poems and poets

  • (2/1/2006 5:52:00 PM)

    very nice...larkin-esq style here i like it a lot. very well done, great imagery, can really see this scene. V x

  • (2/1/2006 5:51:00 PM)

    cool poem, i liked it, liked the imagery, would tweak your punctuation a bit though, the first stanza contains a full stop that disrupts the flow too much. other than that good job V x

  • (2/1/2006 5:49:00 PM)

    Hi Marwa, this has really good potential, but i think some of the rhymes are unneccessary and detract from the quality and beauty of the meaning here, for example 'as it moves my coat' is a bit of a stretch and doesn't fit.

    good bare bones here, just a little editing is needed for a truly superb and moving piece.

    V x

Read all 21 comments »