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Erin O'Neill-Berg St. Charles, Illinois / United States, Female, 80
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  • POEM: On The Somme by Esther Barry (12/2/2005 1:30:00 PM)

    I love the way you express the emotion of the poem with clarity and precision. I can feel the sadness and the longing while aware of the youth and the waste. Line five might be changed to read'is' instead of 'are' to agree with the singular subject 'sound'. Sorry to be picky but I am an editor and can't leave grammatical errors (or probably typos) alone.

  • POEM: My Wicklow Hills (Erie) by Esther Barry (12/2/2005 1:24:00 PM)

    There are a few spelling errors in this lovely poem about the Wicklow Hills in Ireland. I just submitted a poem about the same hills called 'Walking the Wicklow Hills'. I think Erie should be Eire. Line 12 should read 'as if it were weighed down'. Line 15 nam should read man and line 16 should be eyes instead of eves.
    I can relate to this poem completey and can see the spot near the vale that this poet mentions as clearly as if I was there.

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