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Yuliya Barannik Montreal / Canada, Female, 32
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    • POEM: The Never Understanding by Mousheera Shafik (1/16/2006 5:17:00 PM)

      Pretty good but I think it's uneven... I mostly loved about the first half of the first part, the poem is engaging and deep from the beginning, but then it gets so long, i admit i got a bit lost, although very good lines kept coming up here and there... maybe you should consider shortenind the second half, you can make your point with fewer lines. again, but the beginning really touched me, i found it brilliant.

    • POEM: Noah's Arc Number Two by Herbert Nehrlich (1/16/2006 4:54:00 PM)

      I love it! i actually found it funny...
      like the rythm too.

    • POEM: Noah's Arc Number Two by Herbert Nehrlich (1/16/2006 3:37:00 PM)

      it is nice, but at the same time it' can I put this... it feels common. maybe it's just the vocabulary, like, the images are missing. But! it is thoughtful and you guess the feelings behind it. it could use some spark, some word play to not only better communicate those feelings to others but also exercise the writing in itself

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