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    • POEM: Peacock Story - 7 Peacock Indifference by Alison Cassidy (6/10/2007 9:17:00 AM)

      you pull off the rhyme delightfully in this. the poem rolls of the tongue quite well, and though i, as was the case with Mr. Gunn, thought of a peacock of another kind, this did not disappoint. cheers.

    • POEM: Sri Lankan Widows by Alison Cassidy (6/10/2007 8:59:00 AM)

      hi Allie,

      once again, i love your tone. the descripts in S2 are very satisfying and i think highly of its non-condescending voice. this is poetry done right.

      i'd dropp the ellipsis at the end as a period is stronger. and yes, i'm biased against ellipsis... in poetry, that is...

      btw, i didn't know they have safeway in Aussieland. i should have known.

    • POEM: Sri Lankan Widows by Alison Cassidy (6/7/2007 8:59:00 AM)

      this has a bounty of engrossing ingredients: the alliteration in S1, the commentary on classism in S2, the skillful shift of focus (e.g. to the withering leaves) in S3, the confessional aspect of S4.

      a round of applause from the balcony.

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