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Chaos . Lake Stevens / United States, Male, 34
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  • (3/26/2006 12:12:00 AM)

    Lawrence,
    You write too many poems.
    Too many to be authentic.
    Too many to be appreciated.
    Maybe they should steep a bit
    before you send them out.
    Or maybe you don't have space
    on your cooktop.

    You be the judge.
    Chaos...

  • POEM: Lonely People Do It Themselves by Alison Rosalie (3/15/2006 1:05:00 AM)

    I like the excrutiating details of your story (rabbit-ear laces, lacy rose party dresses) . Your tone is sadly pessimistic, as if doomed to loneliness. And at the end, your realization of a self-fulfilled prophesy of sadness. I believe some people enjoy being miserable and crabby - it is their identity. But not you. Your poem shows me that no matter how old we get we are as vulnerable and impetuous as a 3rd grader. Enjoy it! Savor it! Because it shows that you are alive and not dead. Sadness is the opposite of Happiness but both are fleeting and unreal. Your poem embraces the futile and squeezes out strength. Rock on.

  • POEM: Boundaries by michele kostelnik (3/9/2006 1:35:00 AM)

    Something makes me want to make love to you.

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