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    • (4/9/2006 5:29:00 AM)

      Very, very good. You compared my poem Whispering Wind to yours here, but I believe yours to be a much more subtle and hence superior poem. My *only* criticism, is one line: 'Swirling and whirling' is a little cliched, but apart from that the poem is terrific. I particularly like the way the poem is structured as though addressing the wind from the perspective of the trees. Excellent work.

    • POEM: Lost Love by Terry Brewer (4/9/2006 5:11:00 AM)

      I like this. I particularly liked the lines: 'My Sun, my Sun, she went away.' and then the repetition of this Sun-sun phrase in 'My Sun, my Sun come back to me.' Nice.

    • POEM: 0117 Make Up Your Mind! by Moya Levy (4/9/2006 5:04:00 AM)

      Hmm, not convinced by this as poetry. Reads like a conversation, which I guess is your intention, but it lacks subtlty or any kind of fluidity... And I don't think exclamation marks ever really work in poetry unless used very well.