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  • POEM: Death, Lust And Promising Smiles by Lance Carthen (10/20/2006 11:43:00 AM)

    The feeling in your head that doesnt settle.
    Following old broken stairs of rusted metal

    Inviting sin into the secret shadows.
    The killers grave was far too shallow.
    For this king there is no tommorow

    Beautiful death under night lights in the nude,
    Her last smile with her fingers inside her

    those lines hit hard. keep the writing up.