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Alicia Patti Santa Maria / United States, Female, 85
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  • POEM: A Vision Of Home by James B. Earley (5/5/2008 6:05:00 PM)

    Ah, nostalgia! You did a great job with this, James. I could feel your nostalgia coming through. It is all lovely and well written, but I especially like:

    Mirage in the midst of a desert waste
    A faint illusion of another place
    That vision of home again

    A perfect ending to a wonderful poem.

    Thanks for reading my 'Viva L'America! '.


  • POEM: A Case Of The Demon Drink by David Harris (5/4/2008 3:05:00 PM)

    Hi, David: This was a fun piece, more like a prose poem, and I like those when well done, such as this. Also very educationa and funny to boot! I did not know you had been ill, as I have been away for a while. Glad to see you back in the thick of things.

    Keep up the good work.

  • POEM: Absentee Landlords by Cretan Maineiac (5/4/2008 2:51:00 PM)

    A graphic and moving description of our culture today. I especially like the way you worked in the political angle. Your ending is genius itself with the metaphor of wild weeds of neglect throwing a knock-out punch.

    Would like to point out a grammatical error: 'Whose' should be 'who is' or its contraction. Otherwise a well-rendered piece.

    Good work, Chris!
    best, alicia

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