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Dickson Wasake Nassau / Bahamas, Male, 39
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  • (4/18/2007 11:55:00 AM)

    Your poems are all true and touching however i hope you wont see this comment in bad faith but they sometimes come across as a journal posting rather than poetry..i understand your outpourings are a means of releasing the pain but you can still do this in a more poetic style(lamentation style) for example questioning. Poets like W B Yeats, Maya Angelou, TS Elliot, Sylvia Plath, Ted hughes may inspire you.
    Personally i prefer poetry like Matsuo Basho and Robert Frost for even in sadness, life can be beautiful and your purpose on earth is not served if you kill yourself for the bible(which i read) says you are fearfully and wonderfully made...

  • (4/18/2007 11:49:00 AM)

    Dramatic poem, true feelings, sad but well excellent....