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Deepak Manchanda
Deepak Manchanda Stouffville / Canada, Male, 51

About Me : A philosopher, speaker sharing Life on Earth.

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  • POEM: Darpan by renu deepak (8/3/2008 7:30:00 AM)

    Hi Renu Deepak

    Great Poem.

    Though I have no right to comment but still thought giving feedback from the perspective of a reader may help you.

    HAR DHADKAN MERI TERE GEET GAAYE

    Addition of word 'hee' between Tere and Geet will put more stress showing your emotions.

    HAR DHADKAN MERI TERE Hee GEET GAAYE

    Poem's title should be close to Light or Roshani rather mirror. Your writing shows that you were going through struggle but now have found the right way which suits you the most.

    Keep writing. All the best.

    with best wishes
    Deepak