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Thomas Le Guilcher Clevedon / United Kingdom, Male, 30
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Latest 5 Poems of Thomas Le Guilcher

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  • POEM: 4ever My Friend (C) 3-29-2007 by Corey Threet (11/3/2009 6:22:00 PM)

    i think its not bad m8
    but what i would Suggest, try brakeing it down a bit. like putting it into Paragraphs.
    if you do that i think it would flow a litte easyer. the reson im saying this is because when i was reading it i had to keep re-reading some of the lines wich then lost me if you get my drift.
    other than that full marks
    keep it up
    Tom

  • POEM: Love by Layla Norman (1/31/2008 8:15:00 AM)

    just brill you write with real emotion ill give it 100% keep it up

  • POEM: Special Friend by Sesamarna Syfyre (7/12/2007 7:00:00 AM)

    a very toching poem
    nice one keep it up

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