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Isaias Rendon Tucson / United States, Male, 35
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  • POEM: When Someone Loves You by Cynthia Cyanide (4/18/2007 4:12:00 PM)

    This one is the best out of new ones added because it has some form, tone, needs some commas. Love and the perception of what we think it is will all change but this took me back to a time when I thought like this. I say this not to offend you or anything but love is different for everyone and that much I respect you for offering a view on love.

  • POEM: No Joke by Cynthia Cyanide (4/18/2007 4:07:00 PM)

    First, change the title it gives the poem away. Make the reader think deep into another level that he or she has not been in. And take away the last line if your going to keep the orgianal line because in poetry you never write what you are trying to convey across the poem. Thats at least what my teacher said. It sounded like a song rather than a poem. It sounded like at dream girls song the one that used to be in american idol. It needs some form change and commas but the voice was there.

  • POEM: Don'T Tell Me You Love Me by Cynthia Cyanide (4/18/2007 4:00:00 PM)

    This is comes from what my teacher taught in college:
    form is good
    good tone
    good rhyme
    something’s need to be un-capitalized
    need some commas
    overall I liked it

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