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Robin Shuler Nowhere / United States, Female, 31
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  • (12/8/2008 12:54:00 PM)

    You have a nice voice in your poetry. I can't say much different from the Woman. Have you ever tried working without a set rhyme scheme? Or perhaps opening it up with slant rhymes even? You can get amazing results from both.

    Nice diction overall. The feelings come across very strong, and the emotion is true.

  • (12/8/2008 12:51:00 PM)

    It's good, but you have the potential to do better i believe. The rhyme scheme works - but be careful that it isn't limiting you. I like the images, but at the same time feel that you gave up stronger ones to fit to your rhyme.

    But overall, a very nice piece. ^_^

  • POEM: The Lost Cause by Amber Green (11/10/2008 4:34:00 PM)

    clear, concise - and deadly sharp. Gorgeous <3

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