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Matt Mullins Kalamazoo / United States, Male, 54
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  • (4/21/2007 8:57:00 AM)

    Strong Poem. Deserves a better title.

  • POEM: Achilles And Cobain by Sean Godley (4/21/2007 8:52:00 AM)

    I dig this Villanelle. A tough form to work in and your two primary lines are good choices. I like the way it mixes the contemporary with the classical in terms of its subject matter. The meter of your lines is nicely close to DT's 'Do not go gentle...

  • POEM: Transfusion by Sean Godley (4/21/2007 8:32:00 AM)

    Rings the bell in the empty temple, as it should

    two things to consider: 1) might want to consider working in a kigo in some unusual way (though the lack of it is appropriate considering that there is only one 'season' in prison-something the poem could work with. 2) my mind automatically substituted 'name' for 'frame' -something to think about. Nice work.

    One of my favorites (I think it might be Buson, translatted by Hass) :

    Don't worry spiders
    I keep house casually.

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