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Whit Leyenberger New York / United States, Male, 34
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  • (1/6/2010 1:03:00 AM)

    Goodness, quite the read. You might want to look at the poems of Larry Levis or Carl Sandberg as you seem to be leaning quite heavily towards prose poetry. The thing about asking for criticism is that you usually receive it. Be wary of who you listen to. I think your subject matter is fine, and those that can't find poetry in it, well, that's their loss I suppose. But there is something to being more abstract, especially with material that elicits such strong opinions, look at the ee cummings poem i like my body when it is with your body. Hope this helped some