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    • POEM: Windows by Charles Baudelaire (6/21/2007 8:06:00 AM)

      ... that is, delete. (We are all prone.)

    • POEM: Windows by Charles Baudelaire (6/20/2007 10:52:00 AM)

      Your transcription is riddled with typos (well, three, but that's bad enough.) 2nd paragraph: 'our of practically nothing at all' should read 'out of practically nothing at all'. 3rd paragraph: 'and old man' should read 'an old man'. And most egregious of all: 4th paragraph: 'the really one' should read 'the real one'. You should also credit the translator, Louise Varèse ('Paris Spleen', New Directions Paperbacks,1970) . Translators are not given enough credit (often, as here, no credit at all) , and she's a marvelous one. If you make these corrections, feel free to delet this comment.