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Fred Temple Bracknell / United Kingdom, Male, 28
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    • POEM: I Engage by Mara SalvatruchaDemon (3/1/2009 12:36:00 PM)

      Not bad at all. Helplessness is a very depressing sympton to say the least and I can sympatise with the situation illustrated here. I think maybe for improvement you should try adjusting some of the wordings so that it can flow a little easier with the reader-which shouldn't be hard becuase the idea is all there. I look forward to reading more and thank you for sharing.

    • POEM: Memoir (Haiku) by poor lil copycat (2/21/2009 11:10:00 AM)

      I found this to be a very engaging Haiku and a very poignant write- well done. Your words were a joy to read and were much in controle.10/10

    • POEM: Memoir (Haiku) by poor lil copycat (2/19/2009 6:42:00 AM)

      I think that the idea was there and predominant. But I think maybe more punctuation should be used particularly to emphasis your main points, as well as to create flow in the reader's head.

      Good job.

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