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  • POEM: Forgive Me by Toni Brwn (7/27/2009 8:34:00 PM)

    immensely thoughtful and empathic. And has subtle undertones of something you must've experienced yourself. Who do you wish to forgive you, I wonder?

  • POEM: Dreamland by Toni Brwn (7/27/2009 8:32:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, but may I suggest a pattern break of about 8 lines? It will make the plan of the poem seem less scattered and more organised. But I love the way you end it by turning the sadness of tears into an emotion as intense and powerful as lust.

  • POEM: Solitary Confinement by Ameer Mcarthur (9/21/2008 7:09:00 PM)

    not bad. It needs to have more purpose. A clearer story, per se'.
    It could also be much better if it were a bit longer.

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