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L M AZ / United States, Female, 34
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    • POEM: Moving On by Jennifer Hartman (7/8/2008 5:38:00 PM)

      I always enjoy poems about transformation, aging, evolution, and the power of thought-in this case thoughts conjured by memory. The window frame is an excellent choice for the use of establishing the transitioning within the theme of this poem. Clever girl, indeed.

    • POEM: Fevered by Jennifer Hartman (7/8/2008 5:34:00 PM)

      I agree with Gessner, the formatting in terms of line breaks, punctuation, and varying diverse format of this poem and, in my opinion, of all four poems you have submitted to this site, demonstrates a poet who is unbridled and opens the floor for much interpretation to the readers. Well done. Beautiful images.

    • POEM: Ending by Jennifer Hartman (7/8/2008 5:28:00 PM)

      Very interesting Jennifer. I especially liked your night/day-type contrasts (such as sunshine and rain storm. It isn't a simple poem, but you make it sound as though it were.

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