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Lesly Dee Brownsville / United States, Female, 26
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  • POEM: What's In A Bird? by shadow (6/18/2010 9:46:00 AM)

    Good poem, enjoyable read... Grammatical error, but i'm sure it was done while typing. I like the message, keep writing!

  • POEM: Just One Big Dream by Koby Moore (6/18/2010 9:41:00 AM)

    This is a really good one Koby... But just a comment or tip if you wiil, in the line: 'And you promised eachother you'd be next to eachother when buried' the word 'eachother' is said twice... if you were to delet the first 'eachother' it would sound a little better and you would still give off the same message. Keep writing!

  • POEM: Hatred by Koby Moore (6/18/2010 9:34:00 AM)

    I see your overall idea on how hatred affects you, i like the concept. Try less repetition on the next one, but good job!

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