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Eli Moreno-drew El Centro / United States, Male, 29
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  • (5/5/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    So like you requested I read a couple of your poems. I noticed you have a teleporting metaphor going in both of them. Be careful with that sometimes because if you explain it once, a second time may be overkill. Good use of imagery though. everyone has their escape as you have stated and you display that very well. Another brief criticism would be to try and avoid very elaborate words when simpler words will do just fine. Not every one has a vast vocabulary like you and I: P Keep up the good work.

  • (5/4/2009 11:44:00 PM)

    Very good. Nice imagery and angst. Keep up the good work.

  • POEM: ** Heroin ** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/17/2008 12:15:00 AM)

    Thank you for encouraging me to read this poem. I truly enjoyed it. It presents a very clear image with it still being nebulous.

    eli

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