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  • POEM: The Worlds by Helen Hecht (5/5/2008 8:05:00 PM)

    Lots of good IDeas potrayed but I would change it up a little bit like I did below...
    Just sugestions I mean you realy have the starts of a great poet.

    There are many worlds
    But most people of only think of one

    To many, just a place
    a place which we call home
    A place to sing clap and enjoy

    But Out of the corner of our eye
    There is a world with troubles
    A war because of a bad mistake
    Global warming
    polution with every breath we take.
    And many more, too much to mention

    But We all see
    and dont change
    Or just say 'I'm in a dream'
    But what we dont know
    Is well never wake up
    Unless weopen up oureyes and see
    THe world for its become to be

    The world is one with many parts
    some good
    some bad
    Both we see
    Now lets change it to just good

  • POEM: Unspoken by Olivia Capulet (4/24/2008 8:07:00 PM)

    deep, moving
    As they say a good poem is just the right words in the right order
    well all your words were completly correct and in an astronaomicla oreder

  • POEM: You Are My Flame by Cheyenne Ashley (4/8/2008 8:30:00 PM)

    Brava! imazing imagery all revolving around the same subject...verry nice

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