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Dela Bobobee
Dela Bobobee Aveyime-Battor / Ghana, Male, 56
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  • POET: Paula Glynn (6/27/2010 10:58:00 AM)

    This is an example of a very good descriptive power of creative writing at its very best. It paints a very vivid picture of the grim prospect of hopelessness on the chaotic canvas of absurdidities found in existentialist school of literary thoughts.

    But I wonder if there is no iota of ironic twist as an underlying factor to juxtapose hopelessness with the undertone of the inbuilt power of the human spirit known for its propensity as a bundle of possibilities. When the lord Jesus Christ was born, the pessimistic question was - 'Can anything good come out of Israel? ' But today, you and I know the answer to that question.

    I really enjoyed this very touching poem, and I wish the writer could write more. I crave to know the rest of the character's grim story. Surely that could not be the end, for there is always a light at the end of every dark tunnel for every reawakened human spirit. I urge this writer to try her hands on short stories or possibly a novel. She has convinced me beyond every reasonable doubt that she can clinch a Booker Prize with her mastery of the descriptive intricacies of the human nature. Pls take a cue.

  • POEM: Diamond Sparkling, Shining Bright by Dela Bobobee (8/25/2008 11:43:00 PM)

    These verses could be sung with the tune of 'Twinkle Twinkle Little Star', with improvisation by reapeting the fifth lines. Hahaha, just try it. Cheers.

  • POEM: Diamond Sparkling, Shining Bright by Dela Bobobee (7/30/2008 12:58:00 AM)

    A very masterful use of dramatic monologue, and straight to the point. The title 'AUDACITY OF HOPE' remains me of Barrack Obama's bestseller, and I was hoping to see some political undertones. Nice piece though.

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