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[[cant log in for long or reply]]Cena (tifa) Rose [[sorry everyone...freakin computer..]]'s last comments on poems and poets

  • (2/4/2009 8:22:00 PM)

    The imagery is very unique and capturing of the essence of your feelings. The idea of the poem is beautiful and the metaphors and similes you use are wonderful. The ending is nice, especially the inclusion of God and your own sense of style brings the poem to life. The only comment I may give as constructive may be to reconsider the breaks in the poem, for it seemed to disrupt the flow. I am not suggesting changing anything, just that the lines seemed slightly off. The poem is written excellently and the title fits in well with its theme, nicely done.

  • POEM: Love by Narendra Kuppan (2/3/2009 7:01:00 PM)

    Very nively penned, the idea is written how thought, what love does to us all, and i love the ending, it sums up your thoughts nicely. The first two lines contrasted and flowed, which mad ethe poem even better because you are showing how different it can be, what difference you have between the same emotions. The Break from the ending straight forward talk fits in well with your broken idea, not at all broken, but fitted perfectly. Nicely done!

  • POEM: Love by Narendra Kuppan (2/2/2009 10:53:00 PM)

    This is really true. This is what poets do and poems are how we express ourselves... i hope you do... expressed nicely...

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