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Ash A.
Ash A. Australia! ! ! / Australia, Female, 27
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  • POEM: The Pessimist by David Beckham (3/4/2011 4:53:00 AM)

    this was a very eloquent poem and i did truly enjoy it :) I love the way you pay attention rythm of sentences and the way you condense your emotion :) if i had one thing 'negative' to say it would just be condense your meaning even more and always settle for the 'one and only' word. I might be mistaken-i change my mind a lot you see-but i just felt taht somehow there were words, maybe even thoughs that wernt necessary i just cant put my finger on them. Please don't think im criticizing your work for i know i have a lot, lot more to learn!

  • POEM: Twice by Christina Georgina Rossetti (5/31/2009 12:07:00 AM)

    this is one of my favorite poems....i cant describe how it makes me feel.

  • POEM: Buzzard Birds by Fay Slimm (10/11/2008 9:07:00 PM)

    my turn to comment on you! !


    this poem remind of 'the falcon' that what is called? ....anyways it is fabulous and really conjours up a vivid image! !

    God bless! !
    xoxoxox ash

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