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  • POEM: An Angel by Innocent Angel (2/6/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    Ok, the mean of it is very beautiful. I just didn't understand something: is it a poem or a text? Sorry darling, but that's not a blog. I enjoyed your 'poem' a lot, but I think it needed to have rhymes, and beautiful words that is not used to see. Thanks.

  • POEM: An Angel by Innocent Angel (2/6/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    Intersting. I liked. Well, the mean from the poem is very good. The rhymes are not. You didn't combine words. Sometimes, in some cases, it can happens for give us a little taste. But in your case, it became very strange. Well, I liked the words, we're not used to see them, but I loved the mean from the poem. If you'd like to be better, try to combine more the words you use. But the best is the cold feeling we see when we read this one. Keep this.

  • POEM: A New Day, A New Way (Obama) by Del a.k.a. Abe Jones (1/19/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    That's a huge poem, isn't it? ¬¬' I really enjoyed it, the rhymes you used are very good. The words are not very different or 'beautiful' like we're used to see in poems, but the mean of it is very good. I loved it. I just can't help this question: Why are you so confortable with Obama's presidence? Why are you so excited? Do you trust he'll make better? Or worse? I'm not from your country, so, I can't help this question. But that's an awsome poem. (Sorry, I didn't read this one completely)

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