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Very well done. Only the last two lines I think could be possibly somewhere else in the poem. The stanza above it seemed to me it finished the poem. But hey your poems are all wonderfully made! ! !
Beautiful doesn't exactly fit. Because it's more than Beautiful well it's glorified! Must be the reason why it's the Lords' Glory! ! ! !
This is a powerful imagery poem one with music. Great Job!