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Bassam Harby LA / United States, Male, 30
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12/15/2008 5:33:00 AM

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  • POEM: Six Point Seven by Lee Crowell (3/12/2009 5:08:00 PM)

    ok
    I read it at least 7 times..

    in the beginning you said there are (6.7 billions) of illusionists
    that are seeking of senses
    *the number indicates the whole population
    so, you and me are included and we are illusionists…so why are we?
    .....
    you talked about the eyes...(sight)
    then you ended by' illusion of art'
    so we are sharing this point
    then, you mentioned the ear and how it works by a wonderful words(the hearing)
    then you ended by
    the illusion of music,
    and this is also we share
    'labeling objects by creating words' this part was so creative
    ..
    and there is a point here that I didn't get ' the illusion of literature swirls in the air
    while the illusion of science
    arranges the pieces on the ground'

    in my point of view, as a student who study science, I think my illusion swirls in the air...
    ...it is illusion anyway! ! .





    ...So I think you didn't mention the other senses( taste, touch, smell) am I right! ! ?



    I'm just a beginner who don't know anything

    so' I would ask you to clarify this awesome poem to me

  • POEM: A Reason To Smile by Lisa French (12/16/2008 4:45:00 PM)

    very very nice

    and the last part was so cool
    keep writing at this rate

    hope to you all good

  • POEM: A Reason To Smile by Lisa French (12/16/2008 4:06:00 PM)

    Great writing from Great poet
    you have a nice building in your sentences

    Just what do you deserve is 10

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