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Raiyuken Senshu My own world / United States, Male, 28
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4/4/2009 2:38:00 AM
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  • (4/4/2009 2:59:00 AM)

    That is a very nicely written piece man, I like its lighthearted, jubuliant tone.

  • POEM: Have You Ever Wonderd... by Samantha Rogers (4/4/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    needs a few tweeks, but do that and it could work well, nice opening, then a shocking end. cold revaltaion you give

  • POEM: Now Begins... by Samantha Rogers (4/2/2009 12:23:00 AM)

    feeling of isolation, and not fitting in, very dramatic.
    I sense all your pain off of these lines...
    your poems all resonate the same crushed spirit, sad desperation.

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