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Amit Jaiswal Mumbai / India, Male, 37
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  • (6/7/2009 3:24:00 AM)

    Yeah Darkness is everywhere....., but one cannot just wait light to come..........You have to create light rather than just cursing urself that ur in darkness.........

    BTW its a nice poem, have read few more of urs.......seems that someone you loved has left u alone....correct me if I m wrong....

  • POEM: The Rainbow by Green Peace (5/26/2009 2:16:00 PM)

    Nice one, all the colors meaning.

    I do not know much abt poems but the below lines

    Night follows the day,
    making all cheerful and gay.
    Darkness follows the light.
    Encouraging all, to the evils fight.
    Happiness follows the sorrows
    Which none can lend or borrow.

    did not gel under the rainbow theme (personal feel nothing w.r.t poetic standards) .

  • POEM: The Rainbow by Green Peace (4/9/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    NIce one...

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