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Rita Shay Birmingham / United States, Female, 52
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  • POEM: The Ugly Duckling by Susie Sunshine (11/30/2009 10:13:00 PM)

    It's wonderful that you feel more loved and confident, kudos! :)
    constructive criticism: you spelled swan wrong a few times and not to be harsh but most of us know the ugly duckling story, maybe you could have added a bit more of yourself in here?

  • POEM: How Many Times? by Dev Robinson (11/1/2009 10:26:00 PM)

    dev- I can feel your frustration while you were writing this. Your helplessness and care for whoever this woman is practically dripping off the page. Good write my friend. constructive feedback: the ending was strong but abrupt in a bad way, try to ease into it a bit more and if you decide to do some rhymes you should try to rhyme the entire way to make the poem smooth.

  • POEM: Gravitational Defiance by Howard Simon (10/7/2009 7:58:00 PM)

    howard,
    you know that I like your poetry but I want to let you know that I think this is your best. Defying gravity, refusing to fail, very strong idea.
    best wishes,
    rita

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