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Ashar Owais Karachi / Pakistan, Male, 27
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  • POEM: * I Seek A Mountain * by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/13/2009 11:59:00 PM)

    The Poem you wrote touched the sole of my heart
    I pray to keep up your good efforts thats the the pray from the bottom of my heart

  • POEM: * I Seek A Mountain * by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/8/2009 10:41:00 PM)

    Its a good try and I would like to appreciate it, it can be done much better if the wordings should match the stanza's...
    it is the beauty of the poem.
    I would like to advise you that whenever you would write any kind of poem try that your wordings should match the stanza's above
    ...................................................ALL THE BEST.............................................

  • POEM: The Heart Of The Jungle by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie (7/30/2009 11:54:00 PM)

    Nicely written, but I think that the rythem should be more improved. Anyhow, the idea was good and it was conceptional..

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