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Gerardine Baugh Chicago / United States, Female, 60
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Gerardine Baugh's last comments on poems and poets

  • (8/24/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    I read and reread this poem aloud many times, each time the sounds became more pronounced, a beautiful sound- beautiful imagery.

    I had only one point that had me stumble with each reading:
    “That rejuvenates unnoted after each call note”

    I felt that changing ‘call’ to ‘called’ would keep the flow moving and not have me stumble. Just my opinion.

    This is a superbly written poem. Let me tell you what I did when I read it, first I closed my eyes after each line, then I took a deep breath and I saw your robin I saw the guns- which then had me go to your bio and find out where you are from.

    Mauritius off the coast of the African continent in the southwest Indian Ocean. I am very glad to meet you, Yoonoos Peerbocus.

    I am privileged to have read your poem.

  • (8/22/2009 2:24:00 PM)

    “Procrastination” My mind set must have been on writing or working, I was surprised at how you rendition takes the path of love, relationships

    Cholester can you tell me the meaning? I was assuming cholesterol, which would flow from the salad to the word ‘tacky’ then you exposed ‘spilting’ typo? You had me feel anger in these last lines, pinch, aggressive horses, and hatchet, kicked, jumped and scooped

    This poem has feeling. Anger and regret. Well done! !

    Oh, you need to give your significant other some flowers. Just a thought: -)