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    • (12/21/2009 9:40:00 AM)

      Nice. Seriously nice.

    • POEM: On Its Two Sides by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie (8/20/2009 11:28:00 AM)

      Wow, beautifully worded. Sentence structure is quite peculiar but at the same time adds to the drama of what you wish to relay. Niiiiiiiiiiice.

      But are your two sides really foils to each other? Was it your point to contrast the two or more of to like the two sides together? You were able to achieve both, but objective wise, your poem might not about the balance of these two objectives but one outweighing the other.


    • POEM: From Romania With Love* by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/17/2009 9:40:00 AM)

      The imagery is particularly interesting, nice. Alive, yes.

      Although your biases are revealed. I do not know this poet well enough so I wouldn't know, but unless she herself wrote to battle communism fiercely, it's best to leave that image about melting communism out.

      But surely this poet would be some goddess of a writer for you have spoken so imaginatively and vividly of her and if this poem somehow reflects or is parallel to her style then I must read some of her work.

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