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Benjamin Wallace York / United Kingdom, Male, 34
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  • (9/17/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    Congratulations, you're my first giver, so my first receiver also.

    Unfortunately, you've copped for my pet peeve within poetry, capitalising every new line and the complete absence of punctuation, I've always found it makes the piece harder to read and harder to follow and that it's easier to convey the meaning of a pause or hesitation in a piece by using punctuation, however, each to their own.

    Structurally, I was a little lost at first, but looking at the piece as a whole, it works.
    It naturally flows and the words themselves flow along with the flow(?) of the rhythm.

    Content wise, honestly it could be shorter, it meanders a little and in one instance doesn't seem to know where it's going, just kinda sits in the middle and puts words in for the sake of it.

    The meaning of the piece, however, remains clearly communicated, done tastefully and done well.