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    • POEM: ~ Monica Leuneske_Y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. (8/1/2013 11:47:00 AM)

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      From: Deepak Sawhney
      To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
      Date-Time: 7/30/2013 2: 27: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
      Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~
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      ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~
      Nivedita,
      May I add a few thoughts on the content of the poem.
      a) Without a doubt Billy ol' bean exploited his good office
      b) Monica - an intern wished to climb up the ladder using the shortest path. As such she too was an active participant in the ghastly event.
      c) In the given circumstances, you may not have a huge fan following in the cause that you wish to espouse.
      d) I fully endorse the macro picture/the underlying sentiment that women world over are exploited & it's about time they became aware of this fact. Maybe for a poem on this theme, an abstract would be better suited. Do consider.
      Best wishes & happy writing
      Dee

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      Rejoinder by niv

      Hon'ble Poet Sir

      Thanks for your educative notes...helping me lot and will help in future I hope.

      Regarding Cannibalism, I was deactivated by PH from posting a few of my poems. Since then I'm writing 'Poet under threat of editorial cannibalism'.

      I'd to make typographical changes several time to post my poem to reach and communicate my learned readers.

      You'll be surprised to note I'm cordoned to comment on poem of poets in open forum.

      I know Hindu scripture writes, 'Sheryanshi Vahu Vighnani' [may be with spelling errors] stands for Good things face many obstacles.

      My Indian rearing exactly formed my psyche as 'UN- put-downable' so I'll fight for a cause.

      Incidentally may I say, Monica as you said, was looking for a short-cut for her promotion. But what about Billy the Prez of most powerful nation of the world is so vulnerable to prey of entice [this is debatable who enticed first] of an intern. I indeed pity Prez's self restrain, and who can't restrain himself form woman's provocation how he'll rule the America nay world.

      I must say Billy set a very bad example but didn't resign from the post [as in Judiciary it stayed unproved...I think trick of power played a foul game to give justice to Monica]

      Contrary you must remember Christina scandal in UK led to resignation of Profumo in the House Of Lords.

      Best regards

      Yours in Poetry

      niv
      Posted thru courtesy of R

    • POEM: ~ Monica Leuneske_Y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. (7/1/2013 12:57:00 PM)

      Monica Monologues Why? ~

      Poet herself given answer:



      Filles, Monica prescribe / Hey all stand up / Discover distaff /Esteem packed psyche / Outbrave squelch / Slam whop bop for /Therapeutic purging of / Gynaecomania / Aidomania / Timeless barbarism / Female cannibalism.

      These're very strong reflection of self esteem against timeless barbarism.

      Finally she summaries:

      'Not for our survival / But their survival / For social sanitization...' indeed these're urgently call of the day.

      I congratulate poet for hitting hard all such crimes.

      She also satires 'Make it not Modus Vivendi '

      Judging graveness of the condition.

      Fab vocabulary and word sculpting within the radius of modesty with unfailing flair to describe women’s feelings and rapists mindset

      Bravo hats off

    • POEM: ~ I Want To Be Raped [1+14 Words Poetry] ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. (6/5/2013 2:15:00 PM)

      Unfortunately Sr. Poet Bri missed [what I think] the gamut of this beautiful poem.

      Poet has hit hard to be raped by Necromant of Raw bestial type.

      To save her virginity and so used I Want To Be Raped after death .. great jab to society

      It is the apogee of this poem

      Modern poems make such twists any part of the corpus of the poem

      These 15 words to me like 15 volumes

      Many commented it is unfinished

      It not necessarily solemn hypothecation of poets to write like 3+3=6 this can be written in million multiplied by ad infinitum ways


      And understood in divided by million multiplied by ad infinitum. lol

      The Poet Bri is very fastidious about grammar and 'cases' used...


      I think poets as always enjoy every type of immunity e.g. grammar spellings structure syntax &c

      Thanks for sharing such a poem social awakening poem [doubt very much will your effort will come true as the society is like indulging below the belt line? ]

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