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William Joseph Mooney Huddersfield, West Yorks.. / United Kingdom, Male, 30
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    • POEM: Love, Your Piano! by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie (10/18/2009 1:12:00 PM)

      It was a nice read, no doubt. But there were a few grammatical problems with it. For example, I don't know if it was deliberate or not, but surely the sixth line should be 'Deep down into my heart' and the last two lines should be 'More sun-like and fay-like/than I can ever comprehend.' Please don't take this the wrong way, but is English your second language?

      Also, I didn't think 'dove-dear' made any sense. I can understand the imagery of music being 'rose-rich' but not 'dove-dear.'