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    • POEM: Grackle by Ross Cohen (10/23/2009 5:01:00 PM)

      very play-full, nice and crisp, good poem.

    • POEM: Plumb And Level by Ross Cohen (10/23/2009 4:58:00 PM)

      first two lines very good, hate the hanging ing in the third line, the rest of the poem fails to build off of the promise of those first lines.

    • POEM: Pressing Cane by Ross Cohen (10/23/2009 4:52:00 PM)

      The fifth and sixth stanzas or unnecessary and superfluous, the implied comparison of the sweet pressed cane and the the bed-mates is interesting.