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Latest 5 Poems of Steven Aragon
- 5/18/2010 High Hopes
- 1/17/2010 Walkin'
- 12/21/2009 Freewrite 2
- 12/21/2009 Quiet Riot
- 11/5/2009 This Is For...
Alicia Mcnamara
Athena Spelling
That was awesome. I loved the concept.
That was sick. very emotionally provoking. I felt every line and it flowed easily. I enjoyed it. Thank you.
Very empowering poem, drenched in truth and wisdom. The only thing I would suggest is to show rather than tell. Try and push you're creavitity to new limits and see what you could come up with. You have a great foundation for an inspiring poem.