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Rory Briggs London / United Kingdom, Male, 27
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  • POEM: Smudge Of Blood by Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil (3/30/2010 7:57:00 AM)

    The verse is very engaging. You do well to express the brutal reality. What do you think about changing the line 'warm blood dripping fleshes, broken skul' to a more shocking and impactive: 'Boiling blood, flaking flesh, shatterings of skull.' I think the the alliteration and repetition of the letters b, f and s give it a more disturbing and vivid quality. What do you think? The message of the poem is loud and clear.

  • POEM: I Say I Say I Say by Simon Armitage (12/4/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    Powerful. Very clever.