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    • POEM: Alone by Kelsea Osterman (3/22/2010 3:51:00 PM)

      You are in the early development of poetry.I would suggest you keep working at the poems you have posted, keep perfecting, it's a good therapy a great tool but poetry is to be spilled artistically, to coax the reader in, write as you wish to read.

      Keep it up.

      J

    • POEM: Alone by Kelsea Osterman (3/22/2010 3:43:00 PM)

      You know what your talking about and you do possess intelligent but your still coming off quite stupid.

      You could be good but your trying to be too out there
      simplify it a little and really apply what you know.

      J

    • POEM: Alone by Kelsea Osterman (3/22/2010 3:39:00 PM)

      One of your better works, still needs some tuning but I must say Lizz you need to spend more time on them, don't rush yourself, write it down, and every couple of months have a read then edit as you go along.

      J

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