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    • POEM: A Daughter Cries by Portia Lane (8/2/2012 12:22:00 AM)

      Good job! Keep writing!

    • POEM: Out In Time by Portia Lane (12/20/2009 2:39:00 AM)

      'Broken promises
      Broken words
      Broken heart
      Tear drops
      Cries left unheard
      Dreams blurred
      And deterred
      No one left to observe
      Cause no one feels it’s their turn
      To care'
      strong opening. very easy to place yourself in the shoes of the speaker. beautifully written. it tells a story, but teaches a lesson to the reader. conclusions drawn through experience are the best. i was lead through a painful situation, and moved with compassion for the victom.
      'My pleading
      Had no meaning
      Just his ego was I feeding
      So he continued to treat me
      With disrespect'
      another powerful piece. i love the flow of this section. many women find themselves in this sad situation, and it is encouraging to read someone touch on this subject. the more real the situation, the more powerful the message, and this is definately powerful. i feel you took me on a journey and upon return i am now ready to take flight and fight against the world. definately my favorite of your pieces. continue writting. i am looking forward to reading more of you work.

    • POEM: Just You And Me by Portia Lane (12/20/2009 2:28:00 AM)

      i really enjoyed this one as well. it's amazing what love will do. it's an amazing feeling. love in your heart equals passion on a page. your passion is evidently strong and is convincingly portayed. good work.

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