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Shelly Anne Burry Alberta / Canada, Female, 27
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Latest 5 Poems of Shelly Anne Burry

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  • POEM: Lately, by David Sabo (12/21/2009 2:03:00 PM)

    'I dont know why i cant do nothing right
    its like whenever i try
    it ends up in a fight'

    lol i hate that when your daten someone and no madder what you do they start bitchin... i like how in your poems you leave some mistery, poeple can actually relate to them cuz they have imagery.

  • POEM: I Am Not A Poet by David Sabo (12/21/2009 1:59:00 PM)

    Now i write for the bite
    hopefully it hurts your ears
    maybe you will realize
    just what you did through all the years

    the suppression
    taught me volume
    and the violence
    taught me the aggression
    you have created a monster
    now it time YOU learned a lesson

    it has real meaning behind it, its serious and thoughtful in a tone.. you used some masculine rhyme cool.

  • POEM: Delayed My Misery by David Sabo (12/21/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    'Now i see
    Everytime you lied to me
    it was worth it
    for another second
    to pretend we are perfect'

    i really like that part.. its something other people can relate to, lied to but imagening its alright like reality isnt real. lol its hard to explain what i mean but i liked it!

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