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Chris Grasso Merchantville, NJ / United States, Male, 44
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  • POEM: Today And Tomorrow by Vijay Sai (2/10/2010 8:33:00 PM)

    Vijay - reading your work one of your strenghts is your ability to have incredible movement in your poems - there is movement, vibrentcy, a certain aliveness like we are looking down on an entire world.

    I would like a line break the poem goes into the earthquake then another once it starts up back to normal again.

    Maybe add a few lines at the end that might have people doing different things after the quake.

  • POEM: Little Kingdom by Vijay Sai (2/10/2010 8:27:00 PM)

    I like the alliteration - I was think that maybe you can write another version of this poem starting with the letter A, B, C all the way to Z.

    Your poem has a lot of 'movement' by the way you have crafted the words - it is busy like the insects are working and moving here and there.

  • POEM: The Bus Has Always Been A Problem by Susie Sunshine (2/7/2010 12:42:00 PM)

    Is this a poem or a status update?