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Adnan Khalifeh Beirut / Lebanon, Male, 58
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  • POEM: ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***rhythm Of Heaven***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar (5/24/2010 4:22:00 AM)

    Dear sir,
    I hardly understood your poem. It is rich of ancient English literature words. But I think you mean by your words (between the lines) ..:
    As silence seems to croon on rune of void
    Eclipse of sun radiates whole universe


    Sometimes we hopelessly try to hide our feelings
    We stand like the moon against the sun radiations
    Not to let the world know the truth our deep strong feelings
    Our love is like the sun no clouds can hide it neither the moon can do.
    Still the truth shines the truth of love the truth of life.
    Even the water drops can not change the salty taste of the ocean.
    The wide ocean where we are thirsty floating with our dreams and our will
    Hoping to reach the shore where we wish to find the eternal happiness.

    Thank you for inviting me to read your poem. It would be very nice of you reading some of my humble poetic essays. And please feel free to comment or to advise the way you like.

  • POEM: The Moon And You by Vijay Sai (5/19/2010 8:22:00 AM)

    I stare above,
    .......................
    Oh! What a spectacle!
    .......................
    I wonder where you are!
    ...............................
    clouds feeling your gentle touch,
    playing game of hide and seek,
    ........................................

    I look down,
    .................................
    lying over heaps of sand,
    hands........ cheeks,
    blinking eyes looking here and thereā€¦..
    ..................................
    *A girl being compared to the moon!


    Rich imagination & good comparison essay....
    I like most of it...
    Adnan,

  • POEM: Yellow Bird by Vijay Sai (5/19/2010 8:07:00 AM)

    Nice picture...Thank you.
    Adnan,

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