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James Frederick Caldwell A kingdom in the desert / United States, Male, 30
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  • (3/22/2010 1:18:00 PM)

    I like the idea of the poem, but it seems too choppy. There are also several spelling errors. One suggestion: write from your heart. You may say that you have written from your heart, and I agree with you. But, you have only breached the surface of your heart. Look deep down inside and look at how death truly makes you feel. Use descriptive language. Use language that matches your feelings for this subject. Connect with your work. If you do this, then you are definitely on a great start.

  • POEM: A Valentine by Edgar Allan Poe (3/18/2010 12:01:00 AM)

    @Bhaswat Chakraborty: Nice pun

  • POEM: Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe (3/17/2010 11:59:00 PM)

    This is such a beautiful poem.