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Ayan Dasgupta Kolkata / India, Male, 45
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  • (7/8/2011 11:12:00 AM)

    Incongruity between time and existence has been brilliantly expressed in your lines - yes the lines 'With stealthy minutes creep / As eternal breath itself, alive...' juxtaposes our innate indecision between timed moments of glory and the timeless miracle of existence itself... the pain is there my friend in your words, as throughout these lines the belief prevails - that both time and timelessness are true, queerly yes, your poem brings the fleeting and the eternal alive together! A great read - a great realization, my friend.

    Voting a tenner for your thoughts!

  • POEM: ~ Checkmate ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. (7/8/2011 2:06:00 AM)

    Voted a tenner Niv - you shouldn't go like this... Ayan

  • POEM: ~ Checkmate ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. (7/8/2011 2:05:00 AM)

    It's indeed a miracle, you don't comprehend
    But you're a fine shepherdess of words,
    We basked in your fervent shades, my friend
    Yet you say, you'll fly off with the birds!

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