Members Profile

Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee
Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee Sari / Iran, Male, 41
Profession :
Language Teacher
Education :
This list shows most recent 10 activities.
Activities Date
No records of any activity found.

Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: The Dog-Eat-Dog Plot by Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee (2/28/2016 8:24:00 AM)

    Thank you for your nice comment.

  • POEM: ~ Eve Niv ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. (11/21/2010 1:51:00 PM)

    In this poem all the poetic devices, performance and endeavors are at the service of the poet's meaning. I think the choice of Eve is very important to find this work more beautiful. But the poet tried to tell us a story of these days using the images of these days and mixing it with the story of the creation. In this poem the personality of the poet as a woman is completely manifested and the poet shows her pride and power as a woman and I think it is what all women need to have about themselves.
    The diction of this poem like other poems of Nivedita is wonderful and she follows her own style of writing poems.
    Thanks for sharing and hope more success in your poetic endeavor.

  • POEM: A Prayer - Haiku by omar ibrahim (9/5/2010 5:57:00 PM)

    Dear Omar
    Regarding the definition of haiku this poem can not be considered as a haiku because images will be given in 17 syllables arranged in three lines containing five, seven, and five syllables respectively and there should be a type of relationship among these images which mainly have seasonal references as far as I know. I don't care about the form but regarding the meaning from my viewpoint you did a good job.
    In the third line you mentioned an important critical point regarding the Islamic concept of sacrifice (killing sheep) so life is cheap has deep ironic meaning in my opinion life for the sheep is cheap or for human being or for the poet who understands the concept of life which makes your work as a piece of art because we sacrifice to escape at the expense of an animal's life. This is my reading of it which is different from other friends who have the right to see from their own cultural and religious perspective. All in all it is a thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing.
    Hope to read your other successful poems.

Read all 12 comments »